Write and Revise the email so that it has an appropriate tone,…

Question Answered step-by-step Write and Revise the email so that it has an appropriate tone,… Write and Revise the email so that it has an appropriate tone, language, organization, and formatting.  ToIvy LeagueCCChris BigSubjectInternship Request DENIED Dear student, I regret to inform you that we do not want you to work for us as an intern as per your request in your email to me dated July 23, 2021. As you know, we receive many requests for internships from many excellent students. It is impossible for us to accept everyone who contacts us. Your application just isn’t impressive enough. You should do more volunteer work. Also, your grades should be higher. A 3.0 GPA is nothing to brag about! We expect our interns to have a stronger GPA. Also, you need high scores in communication. You have just 60% in Communications 101, which is unacceptable to us. My door is always open if you want to pick my brain about the remote possibility of you interning for us next semester. Going forward, you should ensure that your application is stronger.  By the way, if you are interested in volunteering, your city has some great organizations, like Roots to Harvest and the RFDA, which usually accept volunteers. You can get good experience there that might help you write a better internship application next time. Anyway, it is what it is. Rest assured, if you follow my advice, I promise next year you will be accepted by us.  Thank you for understanding our position. Have a great weekend! AhmedMaRSManager, Innovation Consulting, Partner Solutions Group  Arts & Humanities Writing ENGLISH 007 Share QuestionEmailCopy link Comments (0)