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Question Answered step-by-step I’d like someone to review my short article and fix any grammar or… I’d like someone to review my short article and fix any grammar or punctuations as needed and give me some feedback. Thank you Below is my short article. Military service, for me, was a getaway opportunity. After going through a complicated divorce, I decided to join the Army to start a new life. Little did I know it was going to be a long hard stressful journey. I started going to basic training in the summer of 2008. Basic training was so hard on the body and the mind that I wanted to quit but I needed to continue because this was a choice I made and I must continue until I retire. My main goal was to retire from the Army and not have to worry about working ever again. During my first year in the Army, I met my future wife. She was a friend of my sister and I never expected us to be married and have kids one day, but destiny had its own goals for us and after being together for 3 years; we got married and had a son. During my time in the service, I was deployed 3 times. First time was in Afghanistan. It was the most stressful time of my life. I almost lost my life during that time of war. The second time was in Egypt and Israel. It was actually a good experience. I had the opportunity to be a mail clerk and travel to different parts of Egypt and Israel; and met a diverse group of people. The last deployment was in Kuwait. During that time, I took the opportunity to retake my ASVAB test because I’d decided that I needed to move up in rank. I was a Staff Sargent at the time, but with the opportunity to improve I took it and greatly increased my scores from 91 to 115. I was so happy that I can now apply to be a Chief Warrant Officer. I got hurt during the deployment and could not reach that goal because I was medically discharged. Little did I know, it actually gave me a new opportunity. I got in touch with a VA representative about educational benefits; and she helped me get everything started. I wanted to better myself and so I decided to go back to school to achieve my goal of earning a Bachelor of Science in Information Technology. The future looks bright and I look forward to achieving that goal and getting a career that I can do well at. Arts & Humanities Writing ENG 111 Share QuestionEmailCopy link Comments (0)
