Hi!!! This is my assignment Does it make sense? Does it sound good…

Question Answered step-by-step Hi!!! This is my assignment Does it make sense? Does it sound good…  Hi!!! This is my assignment Does it make sense? Does it sound good for college? Any help or changes with paragraphs will do!!!!! Thank you in advance!!!!!    Writing was one of my hardest subjects. I detested to be honest. Working in the medical field trying to communicate with educated people. I was limited in in my vocabulary and how to communicate with educated people where I did not make sense in what I was saying. Taking English classes has expanded my vocabulary and critical thinking skills. It has opened a new world for me.  I still find it challenging but having great educators (professors) help me tremendously to expand my writing skills. Since then, I have read books to expand my skills. This critical thinking class has taken out of my comfort zone.  My introduction on Sontag was not as strong as I wanted it. But revising it has help me make a stronger statement. Watching Professors Janh video and how he explains the assignments its very helpful. It has helped me expand my writing skills format. My body paragraph had to be rewritten. My sources were not strong enough and I didn’t used the book sources but used the internet source. After looking over the body paragraph I had to cut out sentences that were irrelevant to my essay. Go back to the book and write the correct citing’s. I had to concise the whole paragraph to make sure it sounds credible to my readers. It was Definity a hard process overall but glad this class gives me an opportunity to overlook my work Arts & Humanities English 4559 ENGLISH 1C Share QuestionEmailCopy link Comments (0)